-Hiro
Friday, May 18, 2012
Lessons for Lady Sin - Chapter 1: Poison now up
-Hiro
Lessons for Lady Sin - Coming VERY soon.
So, what is this new fic all about? I've written a summary, but won't Meia and Pamie's Lee and Victors Productions (trailer) show it better?
The year is 800 AD -- the reign of Tang Dynasty. In the midst of corruption and political warfare, numerous rebel groups have arisen, the biggest of which led by the exiled Crown Prince Li Jian Yu. They plot an almost-successful assassination attempt against ruthless Empress Wu. The empress, hit by a poisoned needle, becomes fatally ill and will die in seven days. Her condition is kept in secret; otherwise she will be immediately removed from power.
Chancellor Gong Zai summons an old man to Prince Li's receiving room. The man calls himself the 'Sage of Mountain Tai', the person responsible for making the poisoned needles. Xin eavesdrops on the conversation and learns about the Empress' dying condition. She also overhears that the poison, which takes 3 decades to brew, had no known antidote. She immediately recalls a similar needle hitting her on the neck during the latest clash against the House of Li and turns out that she was also poisoned. This explains her weakened state, her skin turning pale, and her hair becoming white. She, too, is dying in seven days.
But Xin is sly and ambitious. She refuses to die and will do anything to counteract the poison. Stealing a vitality potion from the Sage that will temporarily restore her strength, she fights her way out of the fortress. She also takes the Sage of Mountain Tai as hostage and keeps him in Wu Palace's underground prison for interrogation. The Sage tells her that there is indeed no antidote for the poison and the chance of death is absolute. There is only one way left. He tells her about a legendary Elixir that can completely restore a person's vitality and endow her with immortality. Xin sets out in a mission to seek the Elixir of Immortality under the guise of helping the Empress. In reality, however, she plans on using the Elixir herself to gain immortality and possibly become the Empress herself.
She uses the Key of Heaven and Earth and meets the Spirit of Immortality, the holder of the Elixir of Immortality. As Xin attempted to reach for it, however, she was driven back by a powerful force and submerged back into the water, losing consciousness. The Spirit of Immortality enters her dreams and reveals to her that the Elixir of Immortality may only be acquired by someone whose heart is filled with the Seven Virtues of Heaven, namely love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, faith, and self-control. A person like Xin can never attain immortality with her sinful ways.
And so, she was magically time-warped to modern Beijing Year 2012 as a high-school student. She had nothing but a set of school uniform, a bag of school books, and the Key of Heaven and Earth. There, she meets the ill-mannered and conceited student council president named Chen Qi Feng. The lessons start.
Yup, it's Chinese instead of Japanese this time. It's gonna be like WuXia meets high school romance, time-traveling, kick-ass swordfighting and kungfu, and fantasy thrown into a single story. And I'm very, very excited to write this story to its completion. There are some notable Bible elements in the story too (Like the 9 fruits of the Holy Spirit), but I modified some of them to fit the story better. It would also be my first time having an 'anti-heroine' as the main character of the story. By the way, Lessons for Lady Sin would be a lot shorter than F&L and Vena Cava. I'm planning to go only as far as 15 to 20 chapters. The writing style would be at its simplest, direct to the point, 3rd-person narration to make the story move faster, but not to the point of being rushed and not sacrificing descriptions (which, in my opinion, should be justified. China and its history is very beautiful). Of course, there would be a lot of brain-frying and plot twists involved too (man, I do miss fooling readers, lol).
Lessons for Lady Sin would be posted on Fictionpress, Soompi Forums, and Wattpad VERY soon. First chapter is done and in the process of editing. Will post in a few hours. I'm excited. How about you? Are you ready for your lessons?
Thursday, May 10, 2012
Official PDF of Fists and Lipsticks 2: The Silver Crescent
Due to INSISTENT and PERSISTENT public demand (hehe), here's the OFFICIAL PDF / doc version of Fists and Lipsticks 2: The Silver Crescent.
Sorry for the very, very late post. I know being a busy guy is an overused excuse, but I really was. But through those months I have been working on this massive round of revisions for the official PDF version of Book 2. Spelling and grammar errors and plot inconsistencies had been correct (for the most part, that is. Forgive me if there are still some mistakes that missed). Some scenes have been removed (due to repetitiveness, mostly the re-posting of Flashbacks, which added unnecessary bulk to the already lengthy story). Some scenes and dialogues had also been added and changed (to maintain the connectivity of the plot and its twists), so don't be surprised if you're reading it the second time around. Also, this PDF is ready-to-print just in case you wish to print it. Just don't sell it okay? Hehe. There are surprises inside the PDF version too, so just download it, hehe.
If the link doesn't work, feel free to e-mail me - hlarucea@hotmail.com. I'll be glad to personally send you a copy.
Fists and Lipsticks 2 will also be posted on Wattpad. I've received email suggesting that I do so, so okay I guess that's cool.

I can't believe how many years it has been since I finished Fists and Lipsticks. And it still amazes me that so many still remembers me despite being on hiatus for quite some time. Although I couldn't reply to all your messages, I thank all of you from the bottom of my heart. As I've said many times before, F&L is a story close to my heart and being able to share it will you guys gives me so much confidence not only as a writer but as a person.
Friday, July 08, 2011
Fists and Lipsticks: Cross
Making final touches on the PDF version of Book 2 is also the main reason behind the temporary hiatus of Vena Cava. I sincerely apologize to those people patiently waiting for Sen and Sue's next mishap. The free time I have lately could only allow me to accomplish one particular writing task at a time. For now, I'd like that task to be the PDF of Book 2. I didn't want to mix Ayane's world with Sue's and I felt that I needed that great amount of concentration to finish this task. Thank God for this little free time - better than none at all.

Saturday, June 04, 2011
Vena Cava Movie Trailer
But...
That was until Meia and Pamie came up with this awesomeness. Jesus Christ, it's like suddenly turning to Super Saiyan mode! Now my fingers are tingling to write the next chapter.
By the way, I'm nearing completion of the F&L Book 2 .PDF version. I'll get it up here once it's ready for grabs.
Thank you so much for the overwhelming support! I still can't believe that until now people are still reading and appreciating my stories.
Thursday, January 06, 2011
Delay again
Yes, I am quite obsessive-compulsive. It's my new disease apart from my broken arm, hehe.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year everyone!
-Mark
Wednesday, December 01, 2010
Sunday, November 28, 2010
Monday, October 25, 2010
Vena Cava - Author Notes for the past 8 chapters
Q: What is a HEART device? Is it the purple sphere with the letters 'VC' on it or the transplanted organ itself? - naizz from Fictionpress

Q: I wonder what happened to him (Sen) losing his eyes? Acid? Birth defect?- ladyb from Soompi Forums
He shook his head, "I don't really like talking about it."
"Was the story behind it that bad? Too scary that it still freaks you just by thinking about it?" I paused, suddenly not sure whether asking him about his HEART straightforwardly was a good idea to begin with.
"It's not because it scares me," he suddenly said in a softer voice, leaning towards me until his face was mere inches away from mine.
"It's because it will scare you."
Q: What was the purpose of that glasses? Is that how Sen could see colors?- chyne22 from Soompi Forums
Q: So Sen's HEART is 'taking other people's heart' kind of HEART? - silvernecklaces from Soompi Forums
Q: - Why did Sen say that Sue was his girlfriend? Does he like her?? And did her heart stop temporarily or for good (when Sue and Sen jumped off the VC Corp building)? - beef taco from Soompi Forums
Q: I remember that Kenta was also caught by VC, but for what purpose? - chyne22 from Soompi ForumsGoing back to Chapter 05: Sue's Classmate, the part where Kato Kenta enters the story - he was in an on-going chase running for his life. But why? Good question.
Q: I'm confused. Shouhei is part of VC but why is he with Black Sigma? Are they the same? Do they work together or something? - xxSanityx from Soompi Forums
Q: Sue first met Sen when he's with the Black Sigma, why don't she reported him to Kojima or other SAT? - lullabunny from Soompi Forums
Q: Why did Sen lie to Shouhei about why Sue was suddenly recruited into the Black Sigma? - madenloui from Fictionpress
Q: If Sen is Oshima Shiori's younger brother and his family owns the university hospital and the school, why does he have to work? - kc_chua from Soompi Forums
Q: Let me ask you Hiro, are you more of the Kosu-kun or Crosse-kun type? or let me rephrase the question (your honor), who's character in F&L 1 and 2 do you most likely see yourself? is Aya-chan the characterization of Meia? hmmm... just wondering - jia_kickass from Soompi Forums
Sunday, October 24, 2010
Chapter 08: Sue's Vision - will be out in a while
Thank you for the patience.
-Mark
Sunday, September 12, 2010
Vena Cava Character Chart and New Poster for Chapter 8

Note: The actors/models in this character chart are not, in any way, associated with the story and/or the author of Vena Cava. We are willing to take down this graphic if ever such related conflicts arise. No copyright infringement intended.

Next chapter is on the way. Just some pending finishing touches, a couple of grammar and spelling errors to be fixed and Chapter 08: Sue's Vision will be up.
Thank you for your continued support!
-Mark
Thursday, September 09, 2010
PMs and PM list pending
PMs / PM list is temporarily on-hold. Meia is currently not feeling well. We will resume sending PMs soon. We do apologize for the inconvenience.
-Mark
Sunday, September 05, 2010
Did last minute revisions
I will be uploading the final version within 24-hours Thank you for the patience.
Wednesday, September 01, 2010
Quick updates ahead
Sunday, August 29, 2010
Chapter 06: Sue's Ego now up

Chapter 6: Sue's Ego now posted on Fictionpress and Soompi Forums. New poster from Vincent too.
I'm very excited about going back to writing. I'm keeping my fingers crossed (as usual) to having constant (if not frequent) updates for Vena Cava. I'm also very excited to unfold the plot from here on. Introduction had been quite long and now I'm ready to introduce you to many characters I have yet to reveal. I'm also looking forward to presenting the twists in this story which, although I have not put into writing yet, have been mapped out in my mind for the time interval I've 'vanished' from Fictionpress/Soompi.
I'm also working on the .doc version of Fists and Lipsticks. In fact, I'm half-way done. Here's a sneak peak of how it would look like in the final version:

Pretty cool huh?
Thanks for reading the latest chapter!
Wednesday, August 11, 2010
Will resume writing mid-August
Saturday, May 15, 2010
Thanks for everyone's birthday greetings
Monday, May 10, 2010
Still alive
Wednesday, March 17, 2010
New Rehab "exercise"
Tuesday, February 16, 2010
Chapter 5 - Sue's Stalker now posted
A/N: Thank you for reading the latest chapter of Vena Cava. This is way overdue again and I apologize for the delay again. Aside from the faulty internet connection, I actually left for a couple of weeks to visit my mom back in Beijing. Also, I made a couple of changes in the sequence of events. The chapter is also longer now from the previous 20 pages now up to 24. This is not only to compensate for the long update interval but I decided to sprinkle a lot of clues in this chapter. If you are observant, you’ll be able to catch them.
I won’t post when my next update will be. I don’t know why it had become a jinx. Each time I announce my updates, they always get delayed (unlike in F&L). So for Vena Cava, just expect surprise updates.
I just found out today that Vena Cava had been nominated in Fictionpress for Most Creative Plot – Incomplete. The contest is called ‘Some Kind of Romance’ or simply 'SKoW' (pretty cool name for a contest, in my opinion. It reminds me of a movie someway back). Thank you to whomever that person was who nominated my story.
For any questions or inquiries, please e-mail them to me directly at hlarucea@hotmail.com. I usually open my emails via my mobile phone so I get to access it more often that FP & Soompi. If that won’t be possible, you can post here or e-mail Meia. She goes online more often that I do.
God bless you all and I hope you liked he chapter. Any criticism is welcomed, especially constructive ones. Please inform me of any spelling and/or grammar errors I might have missed. Your help would be greatly appreciated.
- Hiro






