That was a big bulk of info I let out here... *sigh*
But hey, it went great huh?
Chapter 43 in FP
Chapter 43 in Soompi
An error for the previous installment, btw. I uploaded Chapter 43 earlier in Fictionpress, only to realize later that I actually uploaded the unedited file. I immediately re-uploaded the chapter after spotting the horrendous spelling and grammar mistakes in the final version (tsk tsk tsk...).
And yes, Aya finally appears in this chapter. Well, I could say - - the Ayas *grins*
But still the mystery lingers huh? What could be the reason behind this? Well, I guess you have to continue reading to find that one out ^_^.
The next chapter will cater a lot more action... But there would be a transition from action to drama in the latter parts. Why? Because I wouldn't want to kill you with heart attack by putting the suspense one after another after another after another... You might sue me in court :( - - poor hiro... (lol)
Well I hope you liked this chapter. If you have any inquiries, feel free to e-mail me, alright?
And again, silent readers are welcomed ^_^ Just don't plagiarize my work. I'll get really mad if that happens.
Wednesday, February 06, 2008
Saturday, February 02, 2008
F&L Chapter 42 up in FP and Soompi
Yup, a fast update for the weekend ^_^
42 in Fictionpress
42 in Soompi
There's a big revelation in this chapter - and I bet you NEVER saw that coming *grins*.
Wow, I'm actually very excited to reveal the secrets one by one. I also feel good reading the speculations from the readers and I feel good that although the guesses were NEAR my actual plan, still no one guessed it 'exactly'. So that must mean my stealth is working pretty well *hahaha*.
Thanks to the readers... Really you guys know who you are. Thanks from the bottom of my heart!
42 in Fictionpress
42 in Soompi
There's a big revelation in this chapter - and I bet you NEVER saw that coming *grins*.
Wow, I'm actually very excited to reveal the secrets one by one. I also feel good reading the speculations from the readers and I feel good that although the guesses were NEAR my actual plan, still no one guessed it 'exactly'. So that must mean my stealth is working pretty well *hahaha*.
Thanks to the readers... Really you guys know who you are. Thanks from the bottom of my heart!
Thursday, January 31, 2008
F&L Chapter 41 up in FP & Soompi
41 in Fictionpress
41 in Soompi
I kinda had a hard time making this chapter for a reason I do not know. Maybe it's because I'm too tired of playing NBA in the PS2 - hahaha...
It was a rather short chap (6 pages in MS Word). And voila! Another set of unanswered questions! (Sorry readers, am I literally cracking your head already or what?).
A big surprise in the end, huh?
Aya's big come back is drawing near ^_^. Man, I'm enjoying writing this fic a lot now. The fact that it's approaching its climax and as I start revealing the keys to the secrets never fails to give me that excitement.
I'm very happy to have some new people reading my fic (mostly from Soompi forums). Man, the people there are very very generous! Once I get the time, I plan to return the favor to them at least by reviewing their stories to, even though I'm not really acquainted with Korean terminologies, celebrities, and culture.
Soompi people:
kawaii999
PinkCloud92
kute_me_not
w00dchild.jnR ---> The poster maker! Thanks for submitting to us a nice poster ^_^
xaznxxangelx
chng234
Angel Cakes ---> Special thanks for the generous review for Chapter 40 ^_^
rikuu
~~PuhPuhMuh~~
SteFF1004
james18
babygiirl16
Sw33t SiMPLiCiTy x3
raven
stephypham
cream1004
xtrammieex
xradiostarx
nashi kanata ---> fellow Filipino (although I'm half ^_^), thanks for your interest in my fic
yamaki_LOVE
wookie<3
ms.joongie
blaise7259
MRS.CHANGMIN(:
qiianer
renchew
strawberrylova79
windy_vang
loveme100x ---> Thanks for the recommendation of F&L in the Recommended Fics Thread!
angelgurl1058
xong_thao
iLOVEyunho=)
yippieyeah
littlemisstiny --- > wow, I saw your per-chapter reviews. I could only drop my jaw and grin. Thanks!
FP people:
Yas 'Yz' Shah ---> thanks for your enthusiastic, energetic reviews! never seize to make me happy when I open my inbox ^_^
Saiyan Tear
goblinishelves
KittyKaiya ---> thanks for the generous amount of reviews. I'm glad you like F&L
Vanilla.Chocolate
MistyRose14 ---> Geez, what to say to you? Thank you for your per chap reviews ^_^
Keemii
xXMisz-meXx
Esther
peaceout
And some people were asking about silent readers - Well, as far as I am concerned, I do not have anything against silent readers. I treasure them just as I treasure those who leave reviews. It just amuses me that in Fictionpress for example, my fic has A LOT of hits (I mean, a lot) but the reviews do not seem to match up with that. Though I must admit that I feel quite sad that I had a drastic decrease in reviews as far as FP.com is concerned, the overwhelming feedback in Soompi compensated for that. For Soompi, I would sometimes spot silent readers too (both anonymous and signed). They would drop by the fic whenever a new chapter is up. Well, to you guys, Thanks a lot for reading my fic. The mere fact that you take time to stop and drop by even you don't leave a note is a big thing for me.
Some, however, drops review via e-mail (perhaps they're shy to post up in the forums or FP?). And really, I really appreciate those little notes of appreciation. Motivates me to do better for every chapter. ^_^
Yeah, I welcome silent readers to my fic... but what I do NOT tolerate is plagiarism (heck, who doesn't anyway?!). So to readers, can I ask for a favor? When you see my work someplace else being owned by some old geezer from God-knows-where, can you please tell me about it and send me the link... and also help me BASH them? Thanks! Thanks! Thanks!
41 in Soompi
I kinda had a hard time making this chapter for a reason I do not know. Maybe it's because I'm too tired of playing NBA in the PS2 - hahaha...
It was a rather short chap (6 pages in MS Word). And voila! Another set of unanswered questions! (Sorry readers, am I literally cracking your head already or what?).
A big surprise in the end, huh?
Aya's big come back is drawing near ^_^. Man, I'm enjoying writing this fic a lot now. The fact that it's approaching its climax and as I start revealing the keys to the secrets never fails to give me that excitement.
I'm very happy to have some new people reading my fic (mostly from Soompi forums). Man, the people there are very very generous! Once I get the time, I plan to return the favor to them at least by reviewing their stories to, even though I'm not really acquainted with Korean terminologies, celebrities, and culture.
Soompi people:
kawaii999
PinkCloud92
kute_me_not
w00dchild.jnR ---> The poster maker! Thanks for submitting to us a nice poster ^_^
xaznxxangelx
chng234
Angel Cakes ---> Special thanks for the generous review for Chapter 40 ^_^
rikuu
~~PuhPuhMuh~~
SteFF1004
james18
babygiirl16
Sw33t SiMPLiCiTy x3
raven
stephypham
cream1004
xtrammieex
xradiostarx
nashi kanata ---> fellow Filipino (although I'm half ^_^), thanks for your interest in my fic
yamaki_LOVE
wookie<3
ms.joongie
blaise7259
MRS.CHANGMIN(:
qiianer
renchew
strawberrylova79
windy_vang
loveme100x ---> Thanks for the recommendation of F&L in the Recommended Fics Thread!
angelgurl1058
xong_thao
iLOVEyunho=)
yippieyeah
littlemisstiny --- > wow, I saw your per-chapter reviews. I could only drop my jaw and grin. Thanks!
FP people:
Yas 'Yz' Shah ---> thanks for your enthusiastic, energetic reviews! never seize to make me happy when I open my inbox ^_^
Saiyan Tear
goblinishelves
KittyKaiya ---> thanks for the generous amount of reviews. I'm glad you like F&L
Vanilla.Chocolate
MistyRose14 ---> Geez, what to say to you? Thank you for your per chap reviews ^_^
Keemii
xXMisz-meXx
Esther
peaceout
And some people were asking about silent readers - Well, as far as I am concerned, I do not have anything against silent readers. I treasure them just as I treasure those who leave reviews. It just amuses me that in Fictionpress for example, my fic has A LOT of hits (I mean, a lot) but the reviews do not seem to match up with that. Though I must admit that I feel quite sad that I had a drastic decrease in reviews as far as FP.com is concerned, the overwhelming feedback in Soompi compensated for that. For Soompi, I would sometimes spot silent readers too (both anonymous and signed). They would drop by the fic whenever a new chapter is up. Well, to you guys, Thanks a lot for reading my fic. The mere fact that you take time to stop and drop by even you don't leave a note is a big thing for me.
Some, however, drops review via e-mail (perhaps they're shy to post up in the forums or FP?). And really, I really appreciate those little notes of appreciation. Motivates me to do better for every chapter. ^_^
Yeah, I welcome silent readers to my fic... but what I do NOT tolerate is plagiarism (heck, who doesn't anyway?!). So to readers, can I ask for a favor? When you see my work someplace else being owned by some old geezer from God-knows-where, can you please tell me about it and send me the link... and also help me BASH them? Thanks! Thanks! Thanks!
Sunday, January 27, 2008
F&L Chapter 40 Up in FP & Soompi
40 on FP
40 on Soompi
10 pages in MS word - quite long, but I could say it is one of the most beautiful chapters I've come up with, especially to Yuken-Shizuki fans. The big revelations are about to come out, so everyone hang on to their seats ^_^.
I finished chapter 40 inside a hospital room. Last night, Meia's dad was rushed to the hospital due to dyspnea. Gladly, he's alright now and recovering. I had to go all the way to Florida and help Meia go to places to run a few errands. She was so worried, but at the end of the day when things stabilized, she's now alright - so are the rest of her family.
So kids, don't smoke alright? Smoking is bad for the health. You'll just land in the hospital. (*points ridiculously to self - - - alright alright, I'm sorry. I won't smoke anymore Meia ^_^)
I'm also thinking about changing genres in Fictionpress. One reason is because I am getting fewer reviews nowadays for a reason I don't know. In Soompi, however, things are different. The reviews and feedback are actually getting more as I update. Another reason is that the Manga section of FP is becoming a haven of MalexMale, FemalexFemale fics (which is NOT evident in F&L btw...). Maybe I'll transfer it to Romance section and see how it runs from there.
40 on Soompi
10 pages in MS word - quite long, but I could say it is one of the most beautiful chapters I've come up with, especially to Yuken-Shizuki fans. The big revelations are about to come out, so everyone hang on to their seats ^_^.
I finished chapter 40 inside a hospital room. Last night, Meia's dad was rushed to the hospital due to dyspnea. Gladly, he's alright now and recovering. I had to go all the way to Florida and help Meia go to places to run a few errands. She was so worried, but at the end of the day when things stabilized, she's now alright - so are the rest of her family.
So kids, don't smoke alright? Smoking is bad for the health. You'll just land in the hospital. (*points ridiculously to self - - - alright alright, I'm sorry. I won't smoke anymore Meia ^_^)
I'm also thinking about changing genres in Fictionpress. One reason is because I am getting fewer reviews nowadays for a reason I don't know. In Soompi, however, things are different. The reviews and feedback are actually getting more as I update. Another reason is that the Manga section of FP is becoming a haven of MalexMale, FemalexFemale fics (which is NOT evident in F&L btw...). Maybe I'll transfer it to Romance section and see how it runs from there.
Friday, January 25, 2008
F&L Chapter 39 up in FP & Soompi
Another update for the week!
Fictionpress 39
Soompi 39
I included some Shizuki-Yuken scenes. Kosuke's back in the chapters, but unfortunately still none of Aya (I know you guys miss her, but she won't show up for another... i think 2 chapters?). There would be a brief Seiichi scene - an 'implied' fight scene by the way and a reminiscing mood for Kosuke.
In the next one, we'll be having some Makiko-Tomo-Kaede meeting and yes, another Shizuki-Yuken scene that readers would love.
Again, thanks for reading Fists and Lipsticks!
Fictionpress 39
Soompi 39
I included some Shizuki-Yuken scenes. Kosuke's back in the chapters, but unfortunately still none of Aya (I know you guys miss her, but she won't show up for another... i think 2 chapters?). There would be a brief Seiichi scene - an 'implied' fight scene by the way and a reminiscing mood for Kosuke.
In the next one, we'll be having some Makiko-Tomo-Kaede meeting and yes, another Shizuki-Yuken scene that readers would love.
Again, thanks for reading Fists and Lipsticks!
Sunday, January 20, 2008
F&L Chapter 37 *Up*... and Promotional Video uploaded in YouTube
My AN is kinda late, but it's better late than never. For some reason, my connection 'time out' whenever I access Blogger for the past few days, I dunno why....
Oh yeah, chapter 37 is up - - Fictionpress 37 Soompi 37
It would be a rather... action-packed chapter in the first half, but would turn quite dramatic in the end. Kosuke will act differently - and you'll be surprised ^_^
I realized that I haven't posted this one yet here. Above is the new Live-Action poster. Meia collated the pics while I made the poster. And still, I don't have any idea who those actors/actresses are... well except for Aya Ueto (who is HOT by the way hahaha...) and Ikuta Toma (whom I've seen in Hana Kimi).
And after nagging me for a week, Meia finally finished the promotional video for Fists and Lipsticks. Here's the video:
Cool huh?
To the readers, thanks for reading F&L! I'd take the inspiration to make the next chapters even better ^_^
Oh yeah, chapter 37 is up - - Fictionpress 37 Soompi 37
It would be a rather... action-packed chapter in the first half, but would turn quite dramatic in the end. Kosuke will act differently - and you'll be surprised ^_^

And after nagging me for a week, Meia finally finished the promotional video for Fists and Lipsticks. Here's the video:
Cool huh?
To the readers, thanks for reading F&L! I'd take the inspiration to make the next chapters even better ^_^
Thursday, January 17, 2008
F&L Chapter 36: Aya's Protector now up!
Another short chapter, but this chapter contains the conversation between Crosse and Kosuke.
But Kosuke surely would be dismayed :(
For Shizuki-Yuken fans, the next chapter would be rather interesting ^_^
Thanks for reading!
(Hiro, why are your author notes getting shorter and shorter lately? - - - it's because I'm so sleepy already, haha.)
But Kosuke surely would be dismayed :(
For Shizuki-Yuken fans, the next chapter would be rather interesting ^_^
Thanks for reading!
(Hiro, why are your author notes getting shorter and shorter lately? - - - it's because I'm so sleepy already, haha.)
Friday, January 11, 2008
F&L Chapter 35: Weakness up in FP & Soompi
Fictionpress 35
Soompi 35
This is a relatively short chapter when compared to the previous ones. More Kosuke-Yuken bonding here. I was planning to place the whole Crosse-Kosuke conversation in this same chap, but it might reach past 10 pages. And so, I opted to cut it from here and save the suspense for the next installment! Haha... I know you're pissed off with my cliffhangers - but that gives the whole writing and reading stuff more 'suspense'. LOL.
Thanks for reading!
Soompi 35
This is a relatively short chapter when compared to the previous ones. More Kosuke-Yuken bonding here. I was planning to place the whole Crosse-Kosuke conversation in this same chap, but it might reach past 10 pages. And so, I opted to cut it from here and save the suspense for the next installment! Haha... I know you're pissed off with my cliffhangers - but that gives the whole writing and reading stuff more 'suspense'. LOL.
Thanks for reading!
Saturday, January 05, 2008
F&L Chapter 34: Yamazaki Gang Investigating Team - Up in FP and Soompi
Aya didn't show up here, but this is quite a relevant chapter.
Fictionpress F&L34
Soompi F&L34
The gang finally decides to investigate by themselves the mystery behind the Spectra Gang and the reason behind their pursuit of Miyazawa Aya.
You'll learn something big about Crosse too as the chapter ends - one of the secrets behind his real identity.
Hold on to your seats for the following updates! Thanks for reading! ^_^
Fictionpress F&L34
Soompi F&L34
The gang finally decides to investigate by themselves the mystery behind the Spectra Gang and the reason behind their pursuit of Miyazawa Aya.
You'll learn something big about Crosse too as the chapter ends - one of the secrets behind his real identity.
Hold on to your seats for the following updates! Thanks for reading! ^_^
Tuesday, January 01, 2008
F&L Chapter 33: Pretense up in FP and Soompi
The first story that updates in Fictionpress > Manga Section is Fists and Lipsticks! ^_^
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/34/
Read C33 in Soompi
Happy New Year Everyone!
This chapter takes you on a sneak peak behind Aya x Crosse relationship. Some hints are given, so it's up to you to speculate *grins*.
And as I've said in the previous author notes, the story already climbing towards its climax. There would be a cut-down on introductions as F&L's secrets begin to unravel. The significant role of Yamazaki Daisuke as well as the Spectra and the Miyazawa Gang and some political themes will now enter. Hence, expect this previously "light" highschool drama become quite complicated. But dont' worry, I'll maintain it on a certain point that it still has the 'romance' factor and the overall 'easy-read'.
Again, thank you for your time reading the fic. I know that it is quite long, but I promise to do my best to make each chapter appealing for your reading pleasure ^_^.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/34/
Read C33 in Soompi
Happy New Year Everyone!
This chapter takes you on a sneak peak behind Aya x Crosse relationship. Some hints are given, so it's up to you to speculate *grins*.
And as I've said in the previous author notes, the story already climbing towards its climax. There would be a cut-down on introductions as F&L's secrets begin to unravel. The significant role of Yamazaki Daisuke as well as the Spectra and the Miyazawa Gang and some political themes will now enter. Hence, expect this previously "light" highschool drama become quite complicated. But dont' worry, I'll maintain it on a certain point that it still has the 'romance' factor and the overall 'easy-read'.
Again, thank you for your time reading the fic. I know that it is quite long, but I promise to do my best to make each chapter appealing for your reading pleasure ^_^.
Friday, December 28, 2007
F&L Chapter 32: Second Night Up in FP and Soompi
Chapter 32 in Fictionpress
Chapter 32 in Soompi
A moderately long chapter (8 pages in MSWord). Spectra gang leader known only by the name of 'Stream' enters the story and threatens Crosse and Aya. What is his role in the story? What is the 'secret' he is pertaining to? Well, you have to buckle your seatbelts. We're just about to ride towards there *wink*.
And yeah, another Aya-Kosuke scene. This is because the bond between them should be maximized as much as possible now that the story is inclining. To Yuken-Shizuki fans, you'll not be disappointed in the next chapters. I know that there has been some Aya-Kosuke overload, but you'll find out that these scenes are critical (even the perverted scenes? Hell yeah! Haha. Kidding... But hey, I'm keeping it in a modest level, am I not? ^_^)
Thanks again to the readers - for the reviews, emails, crits, and simple hellos. You guys know how much I love those things haha.
Meia, I miss you badly :( REaLLY Badly... :(
Chapter 32 in Soompi
A moderately long chapter (8 pages in MSWord). Spectra gang leader known only by the name of 'Stream' enters the story and threatens Crosse and Aya. What is his role in the story? What is the 'secret' he is pertaining to? Well, you have to buckle your seatbelts. We're just about to ride towards there *wink*.
And yeah, another Aya-Kosuke scene. This is because the bond between them should be maximized as much as possible now that the story is inclining. To Yuken-Shizuki fans, you'll not be disappointed in the next chapters. I know that there has been some Aya-Kosuke overload, but you'll find out that these scenes are critical (even the perverted scenes? Hell yeah! Haha. Kidding... But hey, I'm keeping it in a modest level, am I not? ^_^)
Thanks again to the readers - for the reviews, emails, crits, and simple hellos. You guys know how much I love those things haha.
Meia, I miss you badly :( REaLLY Badly... :(
Wednesday, December 26, 2007
F&L Chapter 31: Race and Chase Up in FP and Soompi
Chapter 31 in Fictionpress
Chapter 31 in Soompi
Ah... The effect of a rainy-day boredom - - instant update (and missing Meia a lot :( ) I'm still here in Manila and the Christmas weather here is gloomy... While Meia's having some icy holiday at Florida :(
About 31: Well, like I promised, another Kosuke-Aya moment here with a bulk of action going on as things get a little more serious from here on. It was kinda long (10 pages on MS Word) and now the story is going to its inclining phase.
Actually, I'm writing the next chapter right now so who knows... another instant update? Lucky readers ^____^
Chapter 31 in Soompi
Ah... The effect of a rainy-day boredom - - instant update (and missing Meia a lot :( ) I'm still here in Manila and the Christmas weather here is gloomy... While Meia's having some icy holiday at Florida :(
About 31: Well, like I promised, another Kosuke-Aya moment here with a bulk of action going on as things get a little more serious from here on. It was kinda long (10 pages on MS Word) and now the story is going to its inclining phase.
Actually, I'm writing the next chapter right now so who knows... another instant update? Lucky readers ^____^
Tuesday, December 25, 2007
F&L Chapter 30: Speed for Need Up in FP and Soompi
Chapter 29 in Soompi - CLICK HERE
(Uploaded by me)
Chapter 30 in Fictionpress.com - CLICK HERE
Chapter 30 in Soompi - CLICK HERE
It kinda slipped out of my mind to update my blog after my surprise 2-chapter update. Actually, I was planning to make the two chapters (29 & 30) fit in one chapter, but when hit 15 pages in MSWord, I decided to break them up.
Well, in chapter 30 there have been some important revelations - the real money thief (I bet you never saw that one coming) and the reason behind the title of this fic as 'Fists and Lipsticks' ^_^.
The next chapter would be action-packed (as implied in #30). Actually, from here on things will get a little serious and a little broader (again, as I've said in the previous A/Ns I've placed here on my writing blog). But for 31, expect again another Kosuke-Aya moment *grins*. Just hold on to that seat coz you might topple over as you read Chapter 31 *grins again*.
Thank you again to the readers, both in FP and Soompi:
japanera
MistyRose14
Yas 'Yz' Shah
KittyKaiya
Nanao Nagase
Saiyan Tear
greek4lyf
kawaii999
PinkCloud92
kute_me_not
w00dchild.jnR
xaznxxangelx
chng234
Angel Cakes
rikuu
~~PuhPuhMuh~~
SteFF1004
james18
babygiirl16
Sw33t SiMPLiCiTy x3
raven
stephypham
cream1004
xtrammieex
xradiostarx
nashi kanata
To the many others whom I already credited, for e-mails and reviews and words of encouragements through PMs. You guys know who you are, thank you really!
(Uploaded by me)
Chapter 30 in Fictionpress.com - CLICK HERE
Chapter 30 in Soompi - CLICK HERE
It kinda slipped out of my mind to update my blog after my surprise 2-chapter update. Actually, I was planning to make the two chapters (29 & 30) fit in one chapter, but when hit 15 pages in MSWord, I decided to break them up.
Well, in chapter 30 there have been some important revelations - the real money thief (I bet you never saw that one coming) and the reason behind the title of this fic as 'Fists and Lipsticks' ^_^.
The next chapter would be action-packed (as implied in #30). Actually, from here on things will get a little serious and a little broader (again, as I've said in the previous A/Ns I've placed here on my writing blog). But for 31, expect again another Kosuke-Aya moment *grins*. Just hold on to that seat coz you might topple over as you read Chapter 31 *grins again*.
Thank you again to the readers, both in FP and Soompi:
japanera
MistyRose14
Yas 'Yz' Shah
KittyKaiya
Nanao Nagase
Saiyan Tear
greek4lyf
kawaii999
PinkCloud92
kute_me_not
w00dchild.jnR
xaznxxangelx
chng234
Angel Cakes
rikuu
~~PuhPuhMuh~~
SteFF1004
james18
babygiirl16
Sw33t SiMPLiCiTy x3
raven
stephypham
cream1004
xtrammieex
xradiostarx
nashi kanata
To the many others whom I already credited, for e-mails and reviews and words of encouragements through PMs. You guys know who you are, thank you really!
Sunday, December 23, 2007
F&L Chapter 29: Money Thief Up in FP
For some reason, Meia couldn't access Soompi forums. I'll try uploading this to Soompi myself later.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/30/
Not so much happened here, but we have ruled out one of the suspects regarding the lost orphanage fund.
The next chapter will be the interesting one. Originally, I was planning to already include it in this one. However, it would take 15 pages so I opted to break it to separate chapters.
I'm currently here in Manila spending the seasons with my family.
Merry Christmas everyone!
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/30/
Not so much happened here, but we have ruled out one of the suspects regarding the lost orphanage fund.
The next chapter will be the interesting one. Originally, I was planning to already include it in this one. However, it would take 15 pages so I opted to break it to separate chapters.
I'm currently here in Manila spending the seasons with my family.
Merry Christmas everyone!
Thursday, December 13, 2007
F&L Chapter 28: Surprises, Surprises, Surprises now up in FP and Soompi
A moderately long chapter, this one - 8 pages in MS word.
Click here to read in Fictionpress.com
Click here to read in Soompi Forums
I was so not-in-the-mood to write the descriptions as detailed as possible, hence the short sentences. I compromised by putting several 'first-person POVs' to wrap up mood. Another KosukexAya moment in this chapter to take the relationship even further, since this 'pairing' will be highly significant in the latter chapters.
No one guessed the bike exhibit huh? Told ya, it'll be the last thing on your mind.
From now on, the story will revert from romance to action/mystery (although of course I'll still be placing 'kawaii' scenes). However, the plot would be more concentrated this time on unlocking some secrets that are still unrevealed (Aya's identity? Who is Crosse? Miyazawa Gang? Spectra Gang? Why were Keiko, Aya, and Crosse in the hospital when Yuken came? Why is Aya's dad in jail? Daisuke Yamazaki?... and a lot more).
Hope you'll still be around to see them unfold through reading my work by then. Thank you everyone ~hiro
Click here to read in Fictionpress.com
Click here to read in Soompi Forums
I was so not-in-the-mood to write the descriptions as detailed as possible, hence the short sentences. I compromised by putting several 'first-person POVs' to wrap up mood. Another KosukexAya moment in this chapter to take the relationship even further, since this 'pairing' will be highly significant in the latter chapters.
No one guessed the bike exhibit huh? Told ya, it'll be the last thing on your mind.
From now on, the story will revert from romance to action/mystery (although of course I'll still be placing 'kawaii' scenes). However, the plot would be more concentrated this time on unlocking some secrets that are still unrevealed (Aya's identity? Who is Crosse? Miyazawa Gang? Spectra Gang? Why were Keiko, Aya, and Crosse in the hospital when Yuken came? Why is Aya's dad in jail? Daisuke Yamazaki?... and a lot more).
Hope you'll still be around to see them unfold through reading my work by then. Thank you everyone ~hiro
Sunday, December 09, 2007
F&L Chapter 27: Gangster Date *Up in FP and Soompi
A quick one, but long!
Fictionpress link
Soompi link
For some altered original plot line again - Originally, I was actually planning to have those "cheesy stuff" in this chap - AyaxKosuke dance under the spotlight with melodic music, candlelit dinner, etc... Then Crosse will come in to ruin it blah blah blah... But I wanted a diversion from what is cliche and came up with a new (and hilarious) plot. I'm quite happy that it turned out right. And the scenes are connecting well with each other to this part so yeah, I'm really happy of where FP's coming at.
There's a big cliffhanger on the end - you'll never guess what the surprise is, believe me (Only I know - not even Meia knows hahaha...)
Fictionpress link
Soompi link
For some altered original plot line again - Originally, I was actually planning to have those "cheesy stuff" in this chap - AyaxKosuke dance under the spotlight with melodic music, candlelit dinner, etc... Then Crosse will come in to ruin it blah blah blah... But I wanted a diversion from what is cliche and came up with a new (and hilarious) plot. I'm quite happy that it turned out right. And the scenes are connecting well with each other to this part so yeah, I'm really happy of where FP's coming at.
There's a big cliffhanger on the end - you'll never guess what the surprise is, believe me (Only I know - not even Meia knows hahaha...)
Friday, December 07, 2007
F&L Chapter 26: Walking Emergency Kit *Up in FP and Soompi
For the FP link : http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/27/
For the Soompi link: http://www.soompi.com/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=176416&view=findpost&p=7834498
This chapter is a long one - 11 pages in MS Word. Originally, I was planning to make this chapter a direct narration of the Kosuke-Aya bidding scene; however, in the process I just thought of adding little Yuken-Shizuki and Tomo-Makiko scenes to make things more interesting.
Due to predictability also, I originally thought of NOT making Kosuke go to the ball. I was thinking of a 'gangster' attack prior to the ball so Aya herself couldn't come. However, it may disappoint some readers and I'm afraid that I might have a writer's block after coming up with such a complicated scene too early in the story. Those kind of things would come later.
Another thing about the Tomo-Makiko exit in this chapter. Actually, that interval has some significance in the next chapter. You'd know the reason why Tomo pulled Makiko out of the ball temporarily (although after me saying this, you could have gotten the idea).
I anticipate that probably on Chapters 30+, the plot will eventually turn from romantic to a little action-packed, considering that the main important characters has been built up and presented already. The Spectra gang and Miyazawa gang will now have a more active part and some Yamazaki Daisuke issues and political setups will be detailed. So yeah, the first 20+ chapters were typically a vast bulk of introduction.
F&L may sound a little cliche for the moment, but a lot of things are bound to be revealed in the upcoming chapters. I just hope I grab the time to finish them. Actually, my midway target is by the end of the year. I'm targeting until about chapter 32 to be finished within 2007.
To all the readers, both in Fictionpress and Soompi, I am very much thankful of the support I am getting. Thanks for the emails, PMs, messages that never failed to make me strive harder in making this story better and better. God bless! ~hiro
For the Soompi link: http://www.soompi.com/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=176416&view=findpost&p=7834498
This chapter is a long one - 11 pages in MS Word. Originally, I was planning to make this chapter a direct narration of the Kosuke-Aya bidding scene; however, in the process I just thought of adding little Yuken-Shizuki and Tomo-Makiko scenes to make things more interesting.
Due to predictability also, I originally thought of NOT making Kosuke go to the ball. I was thinking of a 'gangster' attack prior to the ball so Aya herself couldn't come. However, it may disappoint some readers and I'm afraid that I might have a writer's block after coming up with such a complicated scene too early in the story. Those kind of things would come later.
Another thing about the Tomo-Makiko exit in this chapter. Actually, that interval has some significance in the next chapter. You'd know the reason why Tomo pulled Makiko out of the ball temporarily (although after me saying this, you could have gotten the idea).
I anticipate that probably on Chapters 30+, the plot will eventually turn from romantic to a little action-packed, considering that the main important characters has been built up and presented already. The Spectra gang and Miyazawa gang will now have a more active part and some Yamazaki Daisuke issues and political setups will be detailed. So yeah, the first 20+ chapters were typically a vast bulk of introduction.
F&L may sound a little cliche for the moment, but a lot of things are bound to be revealed in the upcoming chapters. I just hope I grab the time to finish them. Actually, my midway target is by the end of the year. I'm targeting until about chapter 32 to be finished within 2007.
To all the readers, both in Fictionpress and Soompi, I am very much thankful of the support I am getting. Thanks for the emails, PMs, messages that never failed to make me strive harder in making this story better and better. God bless! ~hiro
Friday, November 30, 2007
F&L Chapter 25: Interlude *Up in FP and Soompi
Yeah, it's a pretty boring chapter from the previous 'intense' ones - hence the title 'INTERLUDE'.
But this chapter is essential to interlink important elements in the story, especially the hospital scene, which would be relevant in the latter parts of the story.
Here's the FP link:
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/26/
Here's the Soompi link:
http://www.soompi.com/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=176416&view=findpost&p=7765528
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my works. You guys know who you are.
But this chapter is essential to interlink important elements in the story, especially the hospital scene, which would be relevant in the latter parts of the story.
Here's the FP link:
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/26/
Here's the Soompi link:
http://www.soompi.com/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=176416&view=findpost&p=7765528
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my works. You guys know who you are.
Saturday, November 24, 2007
Live Action Version Poster of Fists and Lipsticks

There was this trend in Soompi Forums of making "pseudo-posters" of fanfics. Meia came up with this crazy idea (which turned out amazingly cool, though) to come up with a Live-Action Version of Fists and Lipsticks.
Akanishi Jin as Yamazaki Kosuke
Ito Yuna as Miyazawa Aya
Ikuta Toma as Sato Yuken
Takizawa Hideaki as Yamada Hidemi
Miyavi as Tomohiko Kagure
Teppei Koike as Suzuki Akio
Ueto Aya as Kimura Ruri
and
Kim Jae Joong as Crosse Williams
Pretty cool huh? But honestly, I don't have any idea who those actors and actresses are. Ikuta Toma, though - I think I've seen him in the Hana Kimi jdrama. He's that guy named Nakatsu - Meia told me ^_^
Friday, November 23, 2007
F&L Chapter 24: The Star That Shines UP in FP and Soompi
A quick update, yes... Because originally, this part should be part of the previous chapter. However, I don't think a 16-page single chap is a good idea so I kinda decided to break it into two.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/25/
http://www.soompi.com/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=176416&view=findpost&p=7700987
This chapter is one of the highlights of the story. I particularly enjoyed writing this one. Funnily, during the previous chap people were anticipating that they would actually do 'it'. But yeah, I'm sticking to the T-rating ^_^. Keiko to the rescue, that is...
This is the chapter where Kosuke finally realizes something --- watch out for it!
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/25/
http://www.soompi.com/forums/index.php?s=&showtopic=176416&view=findpost&p=7700987
This chapter is one of the highlights of the story. I particularly enjoyed writing this one. Funnily, during the previous chap people were anticipating that they would actually do 'it'. But yeah, I'm sticking to the T-rating ^_^. Keiko to the rescue, that is...
This is the chapter where Kosuke finally realizes something --- watch out for it!
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