This is the longest chapter for F&L. Brace your self for a 20-page chapter which contains major revelations regarding Aya's past.
Chapter 60 in Fictionpress
Chapter 60 in Soompi
The chapter originally spanned 25 pages. To maintain its readability, I decided to cut down on superfluous descriptions that may just confuse the readers. It took me three days (and roughly 12 hours) to create the scenes as they appear. I decided to keep individual details for later (like details of what transpired in the court trial).
The original plan was to include here the flashback scene where Ayane decides to take Aya's place, how she tricked the Spectra by making herself the lure, the rationale behind the thousands of Circa Constellation replicas, how she met her gang (Ruri, Kaede, and the others...) how she ended up in Tsuzuya Academy, which marked the start of the story. But then, given the amount of pages, I decided to stop here for now. I devised a better plan of how to retell that particular parts.
I feel good being able to finish the Reminiscence chapters at last.
But as I've said, this is only the beginning. Lots of things are still bound to happen... now that Kosuke has entered the picture.
I'd like to thank the readers for taking the time to read this really long chapter. I apologize if it strained your eyes (hehe...). I guess it just can't be helped.
^_^
- hiro
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