I have been updating pretty quick recently because I MIGHT be gone for a week because Meia arrived here in China yesterday. We'll be going around places for vacation, hehe.
F&L2-CH08 in Fictionpress and Soompi
F&L2-CH09 in Fictionpress and Soompi
F&L2-CH10 in Fictionpress and Soompi
Chapter 8 is the chapter that Yoon fans would love. I apologize for the lousy Korean parts or if they are wrong or if they sound ridiculous. Meia just found the translations in Babelfish. Special thanks to people in Soompi for helping me correct some parts (luckii, bee, cmacaronee, and woodchild.jnr).
Chapter 9 contains the deal between Ayane and Mr. Williams. In writing this chapter, I made her as intimidating as she could be, from her clothes down to her manner of speech. I wanted that 'startle' factor with a mix of tension, angst, and sarcasm. Also, I made it as such to demark the great difference between her outer self and her 'lost self'... a transition between this chapter to the next one - Sessions Part 2
Chapter 10 contains the second day of Ayane's theraphy session with Shizuki. Aside from this, you would be given a little glimpse of what happened in the airport that night Ayane escaped from Japan with a certain Yoshifumi Shigeo (in Fists and Lipsticks Book 1). A little warning though... Meia cried after reading this chapter, hehe.
Thank you for reading F&L!
-hiro
Sunday, July 27, 2008
Friday, July 18, 2008
The Silver Crescent Chapter 6,& 7 uploaded
Lately, I've been really lazy updating my writing blog. Will someone please hit me on the head?
OUCH!
Anyway, here -
Chapter 6 in Fictionpress & Soompi
Chapter 7 in Fictionpress & Soompi
Well, Chapter 6 must be the most hated chapter of the Anti-Saori Club hehe... It just proves that my writing is effective in relaying that feeling. I created Saori's character to cause such pester and annoyance, not only to the characters but also to the readers. Bad news is, you're going to read more of her in the succeeding chapters.
Chapter 7 named 'Orders' particulary offers a glimpse of how Kosuke and Ayane are as 'gang leaders'. There would be an appearance of Dmitri Williams in this chapter too, and a face off between Nu Huang and the doubtful Yuken, who has turned into a professional photographer as you have read.
Who is Ayane meeting? Lots have been speculating that she's meeting Crosse... Well, let's see in the next chapter who that person will be (hehehe...)
-hiro
OUCH!
Anyway, here -
Chapter 6 in Fictionpress & Soompi
Chapter 7 in Fictionpress & Soompi
Well, Chapter 6 must be the most hated chapter of the Anti-Saori Club hehe... It just proves that my writing is effective in relaying that feeling. I created Saori's character to cause such pester and annoyance, not only to the characters but also to the readers. Bad news is, you're going to read more of her in the succeeding chapters.
Chapter 7 named 'Orders' particulary offers a glimpse of how Kosuke and Ayane are as 'gang leaders'. There would be an appearance of Dmitri Williams in this chapter too, and a face off between Nu Huang and the doubtful Yuken, who has turned into a professional photographer as you have read.
Who is Ayane meeting? Lots have been speculating that she's meeting Crosse... Well, let's see in the next chapter who that person will be (hehehe...)
-hiro
Saturday, July 12, 2008
F&L2: Sessions Part 1 uploaded
A chapter that took me three days to make.
F&L2 Chapter 5- Session on Fictionpress & Soompi.
For Fists and Lipsticks 2 – The Silver Crescent©, Reminiscence chapters will be named Sessions. Instead of being composed entirely of flashback chapters, the narration of ‘untold events’ would be done through a battery of psychological treatment sessions for Yoshida Ayane under Dr. Okamoto Shizuki. Like the Reminiscences, the chapters would be in first person, this time as told by Shizuki.
I had to learn the patho-physiology behind Post-traumatic Stress Disorder including the signs and symptoms. I had to learn how to make an acceptable medical history too. It was a hard task, but worth it since I learned a lot too. For a while, I felt as if I were a real doctor, hehe.
I figured out that using 'flashbacks' the ordinary way is too overused, so I came up with this new approach. Tell me how was it, was it hard to understand? I appreciate your opinion.
BTW, do I have a Korean reader around? I need help for Yoon's future speaking lines. Do PM me if you're willing to translate some lines for me and I'll credit you. Thank you.
-The Author
F&L2 Chapter 5- Session on Fictionpress & Soompi.
For Fists and Lipsticks 2 – The Silver Crescent©, Reminiscence chapters will be named Sessions. Instead of being composed entirely of flashback chapters, the narration of ‘untold events’ would be done through a battery of psychological treatment sessions for Yoshida Ayane under Dr. Okamoto Shizuki. Like the Reminiscences, the chapters would be in first person, this time as told by Shizuki.
I had to learn the patho-physiology behind Post-traumatic Stress Disorder including the signs and symptoms. I had to learn how to make an acceptable medical history too. It was a hard task, but worth it since I learned a lot too. For a while, I felt as if I were a real doctor, hehe.
I figured out that using 'flashbacks' the ordinary way is too overused, so I came up with this new approach. Tell me how was it, was it hard to understand? I appreciate your opinion.
BTW, do I have a Korean reader around? I need help for Yoon's future speaking lines. Do PM me if you're willing to translate some lines for me and I'll credit you. Thank you.
-The Author
Wednesday, July 09, 2008
F&L2 Chapter 3 & 4 uploaded
For some reason, I couldn't access Blogspot the previous day so I wasn't able to post an update AN.
Anyway, here it is-
Chapter 3 in Fictionpress (unabridged)
Chapter 3 in Soompi (abridged)
Chapter 4 in Fictionpress
Chapter 4 in Soompi
These chapters will tell what became of Yuken & Shizuki ^_^. Also, a little glimpse of Kosuke's 'new' life and 'hobby' hehe...
Also, I casted myself hahaha. Oh come on, give me the role of the Senior Investigator Hiro. That's one of my dream jobs, you know (aside from being an astronaut, lol).
Hope you enjoy it. Thank you for dropping by.
-hiro (for some reason I've been growing lazier and lazier in updating this blog. hmm.)
Anyway, here it is-
Chapter 3 in Fictionpress (unabridged)
Chapter 3 in Soompi (abridged)
Chapter 4 in Fictionpress
Chapter 4 in Soompi
These chapters will tell what became of Yuken & Shizuki ^_^. Also, a little glimpse of Kosuke's 'new' life and 'hobby' hehe...
Also, I casted myself hahaha. Oh come on, give me the role of the Senior Investigator Hiro. That's one of my dream jobs, you know (aside from being an astronaut, lol).
Hope you enjoy it. Thank you for dropping by.
-hiro (for some reason I've been growing lazier and lazier in updating this blog. hmm.)
Saturday, July 05, 2008
F&L2 Chapter 2: Changes uploaded
Chapter 2: Changes have been uploaded...
Chapter 2 in Fictionpress
Chapter 2 in Soompi Forums
And yes, for Fists and Lipsticks 2, it would be written in 1st person (except for parts without Ayane, which would be written in the usual 3rd person).
A little glimpse/introduction to the new characters...
Enjoy and thank you for reading, especially to the old readers who have come back to read and the new readers too!
-hiro
Chapter 2 in Fictionpress
Chapter 2 in Soompi Forums
And yes, for Fists and Lipsticks 2, it would be written in 1st person (except for parts without Ayane, which would be written in the usual 3rd person).
A little glimpse/introduction to the new characters...
Enjoy and thank you for reading, especially to the old readers who have come back to read and the new readers too!
-hiro
Tuesday, July 01, 2008
Chapter 1 of F&L2: Dance of Death uploaded
Ah, at last we're ready for another chapter posting spree, hehe.
Hey readers, welcome back to F&L. I've finished up to chapter five now, but I'll post the first one at the mean time -
Fists and Lipsticks 2: The Silver Crescent
Chapter 1 in Fictionpress
Chapter 1 in Soompi
Ayane's back for some big revenge. New characters, new conflicts, new love-triangles, new secrets, new action...
No censored scene for Soompi for Chapter 1. Contents are the same.
Happy reading!
-hiro
Hey readers, welcome back to F&L. I've finished up to chapter five now, but I'll post the first one at the mean time -
Fists and Lipsticks 2: The Silver Crescent
Chapter 1 in Fictionpress
Chapter 1 in Soompi
Ayane's back for some big revenge. New characters, new conflicts, new love-triangles, new secrets, new action...
No censored scene for Soompi for Chapter 1. Contents are the same.
Happy reading!
-hiro
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