F&L Chapter 13 - Conspiracy? uploaded

It's a very short one, and not too much plot... But there's something in this episode that will play a huge part in the next chapter *wink wink*.

I placed a Yuken-Kosuke scene again. I believe that doing more scenes like this will emphasize their friendship more. They should appear to be the "close ones" in the gang of 5.

I'm excited for the next chapter. Actually, the rooftop scene was supposed to be Chapter 12 as mentioned in my previous post, but I just thought that it was better this way... Otherwise, things may seem too fast and less anticipative.

Here's the link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/14/

Hope you like it! ~hiro

Fists and Lipsticks Chapter 12 is up

I'm pretty surprised that I was able to update F&L in such a short span. Perhaps I was motivated by some reviews, e-mails, and IMs I received. Thanks guys, you know who you are ^_^.

Here's the link -- http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2191842/13/

I feel good that the ideas for F&L are flowing smoothly and the plot currently have no holes as far as the posted chapters are concerned. Actually, chapter 1 - 12 , as you may have noticed, are mostly introductions of Aya (her attitude, her gang, her family, even her house and hobbies were introduced). However, you will also notice that even though it took 12 chapters to do this, Aya still remains to be a mysterious person.

However, from Chapter 13 onwards, the real plot begins. Expect some really unexpected twists and scenes as the story progresses. Hope you will still be there to see them unfold.